Man is that a project. It would be kick ass when it's finished .. I would certainly want to ride it!! Maybe a few less whoops sections and more rhythms?
Also consider drainage on this track. You don't want it perfectly flat, or it's going to pond water when it rains. You could build the drainage so it would eventually lead to your "water hazard".
I can't believe how much work and upkeep your track is going to take. If you stick with it, have a decent group of friends and everyone pitches in and helps with weed removal and fixing lips, it'd be awesome.
Here's our practice track:
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